Ignite Presentation

WWW: I like your idea for the dynamic with the characters.
EBI: Timings of presentation but great presentation none the less.

 WWW: The use of simple slides at the beginning of the presentation

EBI: Slowly becomes to much text and therefore full sentences.

 WWW: Good use of movie examples
EBI: Simple connations, need more details

 WWW: Good Conclusion
EBI: Need Better Rehearsal and spoke incredibly fast.

WWW: Good concept sounds interesting.
EBI: Try to apply more media theories throughout.

WWW: A lot if the information in a short amount of time.
EBI: Practise timings better for changes don't make a narrative that obvious.

I believe that the concept of my movie and the realistic narrative was a point that people really liked just the execution must be good to have a clear narrative in a two minute trailer, I do believe that by saying too much for some slides I ended up speaking to fast and saying future points that made one of my slides completely irrelevant therefore giving everyone the impression of not revising.

 Scores
S: 3
S: 3
S: 3 
R: 2

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