Ignite Presentation
WWW: I like your idea for the dynamic with the characters. EBI: Timings of presentation but great presentation none the less. WWW: The use of simple slides at the beginning of the presentation EBI: Slowly becomes to much text and therefore full sentences. WWW: Good use of movie examples EBI: Simple connations, need more details WWW: Good Conclusion EBI: Need Better Rehearsal and spoke incredibly fast. WWW: Good concept sounds interesting. EBI: Try to apply more media theories throughout. WWW: A lot if the information in a short amount of time. EBI: Practise timings better for changes don't make a narrative that obvious. I believe that the concept of my movie and the realistic narrative was a point that people really liked just the execution must be good to have a clear narrative in a two minute trailer, I do believe that by saying too much for some slides I ended up speaking to fast and saying future points that made one of my slides completely irrelevant therefore...