Learner Resposne
Advertising assessment: Learner response 1) WWW: There were clear elements during your assessment that showed theory and reversion , however there was not enough to reach the high grades but their was a clear understanding of theories EBI: You need to add consistency/stamina across the whole paper. In Q3 you lose your way and the second half of the essay feels like you're not sure on your point. You lack focus on the question too. Planning will help with this - it's essential for 20+ mark questions. When using theory, make sure you apply it to the text. A couple of time you mention Butler but not how her ideas are reflected in the product. 2) "Female desire – woman as active sexual agent, empowered sexuality (third-wave feminism, McRobbie). Arguably reflects a changing representation of women post-1980s." 3) I would rate my revision and preparation a 5 4) For Question 1, I should have included things such as facial expressions (which fall...